Saturday, November 29, 2008

امرأه مستريحة


أنت امرأه مستريحة
مستريحة ككل المقاعد التي لا طموح لها
و ككل الجرائد المتروكة في الحدائق العامة
الحب لديك .. حصان
لايتقدم .. ولايتقهقر
ساعي بريد .. يجيء أو لا يجيئ

أردت أن أنقل الثورة اليك ففشلت
أردت أن أعلمك الغضب و الكفر و الحريه
ففشلت
الغضب لا يعرفه الا الغاضبون
و الكفر لا يعرفه الا الكافرون
و الحريه سيف
لا يقطع الا في يدي الأحرار
أما أنت
فمستريحة الي درجة الفجيعة

تراهنين علي الخيول الراكضه
و لاتمتطيها
أنت لا تعرفين قشعريرة المغامره
و الصدام مع المجهول واللا منتظر
أنت تنتظرين المنتظر
ماينتظر الكتاب من يقرأه
و المقعد من يجلس عليه
و الاصبع خاتم الخطبة

تنتظرين رجلا يقشر لك اللوز و الفستق
و يسقيك لبن العصافير
و يعطيك مفاتيح مدينة
لم تحاربي من أجلها
ولا تستحقين شرف الدخول اليها
*****
نزار قباني

posted by Utopian @ Saturday, November 29, 2008  

8 Comments:

  • At Sunday, November 30, 2008 12:39:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    mmm..."emra2a mestaraya7"..i doubt she is an "emra2a ma7ruma men el7ayah".
    waiting for everything to be done by others means no life for her.
    though, many girls follow this concept this day...
    that's one of the reasons i'm an Anti-feminine :)

    M.M.

     

  • At Sunday, November 30, 2008 3:17:00 PM, Blogger Utopian said…

    glad to read a logical answer..especially from a girl..

    most girls when reading such a poem.. criticize the person who wrote it or who likes it, without criticizing the poem itself and the situation it presents..
    mabda2 elly 3ala raso bat7a ya3ny
    although the poem talks about "emra2a" only not all women..

    in my opinion,
    unfortunaltely this is the case for the majority of the mid-class women and below! they only do reactions.. even their reactions r not based on their opinions!
    n this is because of the way they were raised.. because of their parents and families... because of their fathers!
    Actually their fathers r also "makhoreen" in different ways in their work n streets n even home, so their actions with their sons and daughters are also reactions to "el kahr" they face!

    Ooooops...didn't notive that life is that black befroe! :)

     

  • At Sunday, November 30, 2008 4:03:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    :) life is not black...it is painted black - just scratch the surface u'll find it something else.
    in my opinion, women or girls (females ya3ni) are even the reason for "elkahr" they face from there fathers.
    At some point in history, females started to completely loose track. Since then they don't do the role they were created for (being mother & wife)
    Consequently, they do nothing but causing problems to men and reacting to those problems as if they werent the reason ASLAN.
    One of those problems is "elKahr".
    I think, if there is anything going wrong in life....u'll find a female component behind it.
    tab3an, men can't fix the situation, they need a "real"-female (emra2a MESH mestaray7a) to support them, which they in return dont find.
    ...rabena yehdy...
    not in vain the kor2an says: "en kaydahuna 3azeem" WHILE "en kada elshaytan kana da3efa" -- crystal clear message =)

     

  • At Sunday, November 30, 2008 5:47:00 PM, Blogger Utopian said…

    Quite Clear :)
    thx for ur analysis

     

  • At Monday, December 01, 2008 10:08:00 PM, Blogger Muslima said…

    انا شايفة ان القصيدة دى قاسية جدا
    متهيقلى مفيش امرأه مستريحة للدرجة دى

    مع تحياتى

     

  • At Tuesday, December 02, 2008 8:08:00 AM, Blogger Utopian said…

    wallahi ya reet maykonsh feeh
    bt i know there is a lot

    thx for passing by

     

  • At Friday, January 09, 2009 4:06:00 PM, Blogger Pragmatic said…

    حلوة القصيدة ديه يا عمرو

    عموما هي بتعبر عن اللي جوايا بصراحة تجاه المراة

    يمكن ديه اكتر فكرة مقلقة بالنسبة ليا دلوقتي لما بفكر في الارتباط

    الناس المستريحة خارج الحسابات :)

     

  • At Wednesday, August 12, 2009 6:32:00 PM, Blogger Roqaya said…

    awl marah adkhol el blog da bas begad gamel w el qaseda kaman 7lwa awy awy :)bas ya ret kan fe 7ad f3lan mrta7 kda
    lakn bythaya2ly mafesh..
    kol wa7d aked 3ando el7agat ely btt3bo w t2l2o

     

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